Getting Feedback on a Tech Talk Proposal

8/12/2026beginner

Speakers

You

あなた

Nadia

シニアAIエンジニア、ポーランド出身

この場面について

社内テックトークの企画書について、海外のシニアAIエンジニアの同僚にフィードバックをもらう場面

Summary (JP)

あなたはAIエージェントについての社内テックトークを企画し、ポーランド出身のシニアAIエンジニアであるナディアにレビューを頼みます。ナディアはタイトルを短くすることと、実例を1つ加えることを提案します。最後にトークの長さや提出期限について話し合い、翌日までに改訂版を送る約束をします。

会話

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You:

Hi Nadia, do you have a minute?

Nadia:

Sure, what's up?

You:

I want to give a tech talk about AI agents. Can you look at my proposal?

Nadia:

Of course, send it over.

You:

I just shared the doc with you.

Nadia:

This looks good, but the title is a bit long.

You:

What do you think it should be?

Nadia:

Maybe just "Building Reliable AI Agents".

You:

That's much clearer. Thanks!

Nadia:

Also, add one real example. It will make the talk more concrete.

You:

Good idea. I'll add the customer support bot example.

Nadia:

Perfect. How long is the talk?

You:

About 20 minutes, plus questions.

Nadia:

That sounds about right. When do you submit it?

You:

The deadline is this Friday.

Nadia:

You have time. Send me the updated version tomorrow.

You:

Will do. Thanks so much for your help, Nadia.

Nadia:

No problem. I'm happy to help.

Vocabulary

proposal

Meaning: 企画書、提案書

Example: Can you look at my proposal?

clearer

Meaning: より分かりやすい(clearの比較級)

Example: That's much clearer.

concrete

Meaning: 具体的な

Example: It will make the talk more concrete.

deadline

Meaning: 締め切り

Example: The deadline is this Friday.

submit

Meaning: 提出する

Example: When do you submit it?

reliable

Meaning: 信頼できる

Example: Building Reliable AI Agents.

example

Meaning: 例、実例

Example: Add one real example.

Quiz

1. What does Nadia think about the title of the proposal?

2. What does Nadia suggest adding to the talk?

3. How long will the talk be?

4. When is the deadline for submitting the proposal?

5. Who helps You improve the tech talk proposal?

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